Panel 1: In retrospect, perhaps I shouldn’t have used the French/ English combo phrase “trop hearty,” which means “too hearty,” much as “très hearty” means “very hearty.” Unlike très, I doubt most folks are familiar with trop, which might’ve have made Emp’s closing line in this panel a tad cryptic. 

Panel 5: Not a great idea for Emp’s first word balloon having a tail pointing directly to her eye. Always best to shoot for a balloon tail pointing to the speaking character’s mouth, whenever possible.

-Adam Warren