Panel 1: Time to sound the Overdialoguing Alert, folks! *VWOOP VWOOP VWOOP* Panels 1 and 4 are the trouble spots, though they’re not all that text-heavy compared to the pages that follow. Still, lopping off Capitan Rivet’s second word balloon here—and then cutting his three balloons in panel 4 down to just two—would’ve helped keep the wordiness down to a more acceptable level. Not helping matters is my choice to go with nothing but close-ups for this page’s panels, which makes matters even worse in my eyes. 

Panel 3: Note that one of the supervillains from the earlier story “Of Maids and Wet Blankets” mentioned doses of Mayfly when targeting the Suprahuman Treatment Wing’s pharmacy.

-Adam Warren