Volume 6 Page 154
Posted January 22, 2020 at 12:01 am

Panels 1 and 5: Note that Ninjette is carrying her sword, which does become a plot point of sorts later on in this story. (To be a truly annoying nitpicker, you might keep an eye out and see if I forget to draw the g-d thing from time to time throughout the pages that follow, a continuity lapse that I am tragically prone to commit.)

Panel 3: Not a big deal, really, but the shift in direction of movement from left to right between panels isn’t ideal. (Ehh, I can live with it, though.)

Panel 5: Ninjette, NO—! (Or should that be, “Ninjette, YES—!”?)

Today’s Patreon update: As it’s a Wednesday, time for the $5+ Patron tiers to get their weekly dose of commissioned damsel-in-distress content! This time around, we’re serializing another story fragment featuring (very) familiar lasses in perilous situations.

-Adam Warren

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