Panel 1: Arguably at least, Overdialoguing Alert on this panel’s Demonwolf ranting. I could’ve removed at least one balloon out of the sequence, if not possibly two.
Panel 2: Long-time Empowered readers will note that this brief scene is a trial run for the more extended—and, alas, excruciating to some—Demonwolf narration in the vol.5 story “When Titans Fornicate.”
Panel 3: Believe it or not, the reference to the diminutive man in Ninjette’s canoe—ahem—is foreshadowing of sorts for the next story. (I repeat, ahem.)
-Adam Warren