Panel 2: Ehh, probably should’ve gone with the slightly clearer “PLUMB-TUCKERED-OUT” for the Demonwolf’s second word balloon. Then again, “PLUMB TUCKERED OUT” is undoubtedly a bit of country-sounding slang that I doubt anyone under 30—or 40, or 50—has heard very often of late.
Panel 4: To be honest, Ninjette probably should be sleeping in underpants rather than her namesake-labeled shorts, as one would think those shuriken on her hips would be notably uncomfortable as heck while trying to sleep on a sofa. On the other hand, screw it. (Besides, my value-craving artist’s eye keenly appreciates—indeed, requires—the deep blacks of her costume shorts.)
-Adam Warren