Panel 2: Not fond of having the word balloon’s tail just touching the top of Ninjette’s head. Nowadays, I’d use a short, crooked balloon tail placed a bit to the right of her head, clearly indicating that she’s speaking without actually touching her image. Decent shot of Ninjette, though.

Panel 4: Ooh! Ah! So-called “implied nudity,” which is a term that’s always cracked me up. Does nudity we can’t see still count as nudity? What about the unseen nudity implied by clothing? (Said by an artist who’s had work rejected due to “implied nudity.” Ughh.)

-Adam Warren