Panels 1-2: I still like this silent, two-panel sequence quite a bit. (A welcome respite from the tsunami of overdialoguing that will soon wash over this volume.) Never let it be said that I’m only negatively critiquing my old work, folks!

Panel 6: While I’m no longer quite so fond of long, elaborate single-letter alliteration combos in the Demonwolf’s dialogue, I do remain appreciative of alternating-letter combos, such as the fine example here with “the witchy wench’s niggling neuroses.”

-Adam Warren