Sadly, as I am still unable to draw or type at the moment due to drawing-hand issues, about the only halfway constructive work I can accomplish right now is to dictate s'more webcomic commentaries via Windows speech recognition, however slowly and awkwardly. Well, let's get cracking, shall we?
Panel 1: Interesting to see another early example of what I call the "graphite-haloed sound FX" with good ol' SKRANGG here. This would go on to be a default practice of mine in later volumes.
Panel 3: Took a very different approach with this panel's CHOOM sound FX, in that I inked the letters and then, after the spear and background elements were penciled, added an outline around 'em using white-out.
Panel 5: Whatever might have stopped that personal-space-invading Phallospear? Let's find out tomorrow, folks!
-Adam Warren