Panels 1-4: As the Overdialoguing Alert sounds, lemme say that the real issue, here, is Decade-Ago Me deciding to place dialogue at both the top and bottom of each panel.  Would’ve worked better, I think, to have rolled with less text, placed only at the top of each panel.

Panel 4: In the third Demonwolf word balloon, not sure why I didn't ask Dark Horse Production to center the word "STRUMPET" in its line, which I would usually do with such an off-center bit of hand-lettering.

Panel 5: Belatedly occurred to me that tear-driven snot does become an actual, significant plot plot in a story later on in this volume.  I would love to claim that this panel’s literal snottiness represents farsighted foreshadowing on Decade Ago Me’s part, but it almost certainly doesn’t.

-Adam Warren