Panel 2: Not a major issue, but I probably should’ve placed the “FWIPP FWIPP FWIPP” sound FX to the right of the spinning chunk of debris, so that the WHOOOSH could’ve—at least in theory—been read first. (Well, maybe.)

Panel 3: Ehh, the speedlines in this scene as a whole arguably darken the page a bit too much, especially since I started using the visual riff of slapping an HB-lead “graphite halo” over those lines. Then again, because I keep every other panel on a comic page masked off by copy paper—save for the one I’m working on—I often find it difficult to perceive that the overall page is becoming excessively dark or muddied.

Panels 5-6: Note Ninjette snagging Emp’s supersuit and the off-panel “SHRIPP” sound FX.

Today’s Patreon update: Open slot in the weekly schedule today! Not sure what I’ll be posting, but something will go up today. I’ve been posting every weekday (sometimes multiple times per day) on this Patreon for over a year, so why stop now? 

-Adam Warren