Panel 1: Time to sound the Excessively Petite Ninjette Feet Alert, folks! WEE OOO WEE OOO 

Also, looks like I forgot the wall-mounted soap holder and the bottles of shampoo set up on the corner of the bathtub, as seen in the establishing shot for this sequence. Alternatively, I might’ve just left that stuff outta the shot as those elements might’ve been mildly distracting. The former is more likely than the latter, but leaving extraneous bits out of backgrounds can be a valid storytelling approach, as opposed to inflexibly insisting on absolute visual continuity at all times.

Panel 3: Ehh, I wouldn’t yet sound the dreaded Overdialoguing Alert here, but this is arguably bit too much text density for one panel.

Today’s Patreon Update: As this is a Monday, time for our weekly double dose of life drawings new-ish (2018) and old (2017) along with the high-res Photoshop raw scans for both of ‘em, available to all Patron tiers.

-Adam Warren